* Cleaned up the wording of the crashmail message

diff --git a/citadel/sysdep.c b/citadel/sysdep.c
index 9af1a578989bcbf3b4368c1b3776643b60c5353c..1c681a87049cee1891105f942b12530c1f34eaeb 100644 (file)
--- a/citadel/sysdep.c
+++ b/citadel/sysdep.c
@@ -993,16 +993,20 @@ void checkcrash(void)
                StrBuf *CrashMail;
 
                CrashMail = NewStrBuf();
-               CtdlLogPrintf (CTDL_ALERT, "----------------sending crash mail\n");
+               CtdlLogPrintf(CTDL_ALERT, "Posting crash message\n");
                StrBufPrintf(CrashMail, 
-                            "Your CitServer is just recovering from an unexpected termination.\n"
-                            " this maybe the result of an error in citserver or an external influence.\n"
-                            " You can get more information on this by enabling coredumping; for more information see\n"
-                            " http://citadel.org/doku.php/faq:mastering_your_os:gdb#how.do.i.make.my.system.produce.core-files\n"
-                            " If you already did, the file you're looking for most probably is %score.%d\n"
-                            " Yours faithfully...",
-                            ctdl_run_dir, ForkedPid);
-               aide_message(ChrPtr(CrashMail), "Citadel server crashed.");
+                       " \n"
+                       " The Citadel server process (citserver) terminated unexpectedly."
+                       "\n \n"
+                       " This could be the result of a bug in the server program, or some external "
+                       "factor.  You can obtain more information about this by enabling core dumps. "
+                       "For more information, please see: "
+                       "http://citadel.org/doku.php/faq:mastering_your_os:gdb#how.do.i.make.my.system.produce.core-files"
+                       "\n \n"
+                       " If you have already done this, the core dump is likely to be found at %score.%d\n"
+                       ,
+                       ctdl_run_dir, ForkedPid);
+               aide_message(ChrPtr(CrashMail), "Citadel server process terminated unexpectedly");
                FreeStrBuf(&CrashMail);
        }
 }